Thanks for the presentation! Sounds cool. Here is my immediate feedback.
I don’t agree with gamifying a DAO in any way (points system). I believe DAO members should be moved by the core values and the mission of the project. However, I do think that passive rewards for ACTIVE membership is fair. This goes back to an “earnestness model”, not capital (which is already rewarded for holding any LST). And at this point it’s harder to reward earnestness with the cat out of the bag.
That being said, I fully agree that we need to get a DAO together and organized ASAP. The platform we use is up for debate. Your offering is still an intriguing one, in my opinion. And I know we all like rewards! 
Please correct me if it seems I misunderstood your proposal.